OMG YESS this is beautiful. the colors are just right, not too dark..... the fact that they're so light makes the picture so much happier and prettier c: and the poseeee <3 I always think of Fluttershy as the innocent baby and Dash as the dominant protective tomboy
*grabs heart* OH DANG! *crash* *medic walks in* "well... he is dead, cardiac arrest it would seem. wait, whats this" *clicks* "AH this picture, now it makes sense!" honest though, amazing and SOOO cute!! <3 all my squee!!
I like how the colors are vibrant and bright, which, to me, suits the scene played out. The only thing I don't like is how this picture seems off balance, with all of the detail and action being on the left side. It's nice that you did this for a fundraiser as well!